Thursday, March 24, 2016

Heart's Silent Speech (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

left in his presence
I just feel the need to speak
in hope that I may
conceal my heart revealing
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Mihaela Pirjol
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2018

So beautifully it has been penned on love. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

To speak out! ! And to heal your Soul. Nice piece of work.

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Mike Smith 04 April 2016

I've always had admiration for those who can pack profound messages into so few words and syllables. This poem does that and more. Beautiful write

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M Asim Nehal 24 March 2016

Wow, seldom we try to read and listen to heart, how often we miss this vital signal and keep ourselves busy with routines and futile messages. Thought provoking Tanka.100+++

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