Heart's Haven Comments

A nice poetry. I like it.

This is a fragmentary piece or may be just an introduction! Your heroine, may be around thirty years is pictured in a garden of rare flowers.... obviously she is of princely birth with silver slippers and hands warmed in softest mittens.... Her conscious happiness is unperturbed unlike that of the two heroines of Shakespeare mentioned in the poem... Perdita, born in a prison as a suspected illegitimate child and Ophelia, one of the most tragic heroines of Shakespeare! I don't get the real thread of the poem... still I have enjoyed it and the concluding lines' I have travelled many miles to witness this'...... leaves me again at the brink of suspense!

A poem that's seems an eternity of time indeed an haven of the heart that has lasted three score and ten worth seeing for sure....interesting poem thanks and regards

'a cloak of flesh wrapped around your body, your soul thrown into the heart of things' A visionary fragment of the most intense.. Love its musicality, its precious 'hue'.. With a finale: 'I have traveled many miles to witness this, only this, nothing else.' ...that is another 'sceptre'.. one of the highest pick..