Tuesday, December 19, 2017

Heart's Desire Comments

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Looking out in my window pane
I see the sun sitting on the lane;
At the edge of the mountainous range.
The sundown lit a nimble luminescence,
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Unwritten Soul 22 December 2017

The feeling you made into words and lines really still have it emotions...and as much as it sounds alive it creates such a vivid imagery too..keep writing it is nice to see you keep writing after so long since i have read you for the first time.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2017

Marvin, such a heartwarming poem...10+++

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Marvin Brato 19 December 2017

Thank for reading... appreciated!

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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