Sunday, July 1, 2012

Heart Pure And Wide! Comments

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Heart Should be sure,
Nothing is perpetual,
Heart should be true and pure,
Neither the pain nor the happiness,
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Ramdas Bhandarkar
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Lots of positive, poetic verve thrusting through this pen-gem...Your stanzaic breaks are spot-on and enables the work to flux mellifluously....Stellar work, here... ~FjR~

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