Friday, February 17, 2012

Heart Phases Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes…
Your heart is made of ICE
Like every tear you ever cried has frozen round it..
Forming a frosty… thick… protective barrier….
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sharon catley
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Rick Adriolo 17 February 2012

I'm loving your poem.. the way it's written and the way its build up.. Very good job! 10+

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