Sunday, March 11, 2012

Heart Or Mind Comments

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How come the persons we love never love us back
and the ones who love us always lose our track
It makes you wonder how this world functions
and you keep searching for any other options
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Khairul Ahsan 23 June 2017

'Running after that person, you realise it's becoming an addiction by using your brain you know it's nothing more than fiction' - Yes, true! But at that stage, hardly any person uses his brain. :) 'Is it heart or mind the one that will bring you glory Or are they both necessary to finish this story? ' - The poem ends with a quizzical question. Nice!

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Beach Girl 17 November 2013

Beautiful poem! Love the verse The heart will push you to go on beyond this galaxy So in the end it's up to you to choose in who's line you should be and which item you need to lose

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