Friday, February 17, 2006

Heart Or A Languishing Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Great men and despised slaves
All close their eyes
And bid farewell to tender sunsets
And the glorious sunrise,
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 22 September 2007

This teardropp of a poem touched my heart. Beautiful work, Uriah. - Will

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Ivy Christou 23 February 2006

this was beautiful Uriah.. you mention tears and how you hope for them to fall on a heart. I can assure you that yours not only fall in a heart but they touch it as well leaving their mark.. All the best HBH

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Mary Nagy 21 February 2006

Uriah, your tenderness always amazes me. I wish everyone could see the world through your eyes. sincerely, Mary

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Sandra Fowler 17 February 2006

The fall of a leaf, the ceasing of a song, the death of a flower, all of these things diminish this present landscape in ways that the unpoetic person can never understand. Praise for your empathy with the brevity of all things. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Lisa Arnold 17 February 2006

great write, enjoyed this much!

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