Atmosphere full of fear
Hard to feel the heat of tear
Heart of the sea turns into steel
That dream is only so real
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Splendid poem! I loved it specially the first stanza, , , Good Work! 10++
This is really a good poem, Hassan, perfectly reflects the title. Imagery is another feature of this beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. Best wishes. Naseer
Excellent, brother, what a masterpiece, very deep and meaningful, I really understand what you are saying, from the bottom of my heart, since I speak your language...Great poem, you clearly got your message across...Keep it up! 10+++++(Sorry, brother, I have been having problems with the site when it comes to rating, I try and try, many times, but it won't go through...) Love and Peace, Romeo
Started to dream of the butterfly's wings nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism 10/10
it's very musical that's what i liked the most....nicely written...thanks for sharing.