Monday, November 27, 2017

Heart Of The Champion Comments

Rating: 5.0

H-eart of the champion
A-ims to show its winning form;
N-ever does it surrender
N-or does it succumb to storm.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Valsa George 05 December 2020

Only he who is never frightened of his adversaries and is ready to put his might becomes a champion. He should win through righteous deeds and firm determination! A very inspiring acrostic!

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Rajen 22 June 2020

Heart is the champion not retreating but always beating even in odd circumstances. But the attack of Covid stops the heart from beating in two days. It need not surrender. When the heart engine weakens, the doctors transplant it. I think there are artificial hearts kept ready for emergency. If there is no intervention of Science, heart is the champion.

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Robert Murray Smith 13 June 2018

A truly wonderful composition. Showing the strength of champions.++10

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So thankful, Robert for your outstanding remark๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2017

Brave heart of Champion values more in expressing courage. A nice poem is beautifully penned.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 November 2017

Thanks, Kumarmani.... Iโ€™m running out of words to thank you๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Dawn Novus 27 November 2017

B- Brave and Bold E- Earnest in devine calling R- Righteous and Real his words N-Never ever Falters A-Aims for Excellence Always R-River of Rescued Souls D- Does only Good to Others

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 November 2017

Thanks, Loza... Iโ€™m humbled by your visit and your acrostic๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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