Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Heart Of Stone Comments

Rating: 5.0

A broken wing, and a broken bone
Of a bird, that met a stone
Lied helpless And was bit despair
Looked above If god was there.
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kanav justa
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Lyn Paul 31 January 2016

Simply beautiful to read, Heartfelt words. Thank you Have been searching for your work for sometime. Take good care.

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* Sunprincess * 09 January 2015

.....and the bird's soul was set free....forever to enjoy blue skies and sing love songs for his love...hmm :)

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Sandra Feldman 26 June 2014

Very, very, very touching. Tell me dear poet, do we also have to die to be free.? I suppose so?

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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014

..................~~~~~~~~ favourite favourite favourite ~~~~~~~.................

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Rishabh Bidya 22 December 2013

Marvellous! ! ! Love reading your poems, Keep writing: D

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Matt Mooney 21 December 2012

I love it.You.got right into the heart of the matter.A classic.10.

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Owain Glyn 15 December 2012

Wonderful! , I loved it. Keep it up.

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Hazel Durham 09 December 2012

A great moral in this poem brilliantly crafted, outstanding write! !

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Rizvana Parveen 07 December 2012

Beautifully expressed.The image of the bird is excellently used..Indeed there is no place for soft souls in this heartless world...Tfs

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Elena Sandu 29 November 2012

This is a wonderful poem! Deep wisely told, loved very much this story of heart of stone facing a free soul.

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A B 29 November 2012

g8 one...nice imagination

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Stevie Taite 29 November 2012

Injury of the bird heart by a heat of stone. Make your bird an angel, and find a cloud nine heart and soul! X Good one

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Scarlett Outlaw 28 November 2012

Hey - great poem! It is filled with all sorts of things - well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 28 November 2012

Bird was dead and his soul was free. good image. Thanks. I request you to read my poems and comment.

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