Friday, May 1, 2009

Heart Of Ice Comments

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Forever is a love long forgotten
In a heart made of ice
That can no longer feel
Joy for things has been lost
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Taylor S 20 May 2009

This is a new rewrite of my old poem Heart of Ice which was: Forever is a love long forgotten In a heart made of ice A yearning to turn the aura Of gold to black For things long ago can not always be Found in a heart of ice

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Steven Taylor 20 May 2009

you can do much better than this one, you lost me, however the first line is captivating, you should consider a rewrite

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