Friday, May 8, 2009
Heart Of Glass Comments
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Don't tiptoe around me 'cause
my heart is made of glass.
Don't fight to finish,
fight to last.
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Melissa Black
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8/2/2025 1:43:18 PM # 1.0.0
Okay, the message of this poem is loud, clear, and beautiful. I really like the line 'don't fight to finish/fight to last.' That is deep, girlfriend. The last line, though, is rhythmically a little awkward. Also, I hate you because you can rhyme better than me. annnnd...kudos on the Blondie reference.