Heart Of Ghosts Comments

i usually don't gravitate toward love poems, and few are in MyPoemList. BUT this is more like an anti-love poem, and i'll send it to MyPoemList now. bri :)

do you write all of your poems in one minute? do you think long about them before starting to write? but, you are still putting an apostrophe in its when it does not belong there! naughty naughty. get ready for the spanking. but i like the poem. what's not to like about a poem aimed toward misery? favorite lines: Alas, love was fickle, it's bright and burning flame was snuffed out by insincerity, cheating, lies and deceit. and: At times feeling contempt or hatred for the way it was treated, yet in the end there was nothing it could do against the onslaught of a mistaken love.11: 02 a.m. nice one. bri :)