Like a desert my heart drys out
only memories will i remember you by
Like the ocean, it will go on
For eternity....
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your words touch my soul...beautiful write..love your style, very refreshing..blessings
wowo that was amazing i just loved it it was breath taking ur an amazing wrtiter keep going breath taking i dont even have words for it its so good
food for body, thought for mind and prayer for soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! if your heart died soul remains! ! ! ! give something to soul it will cure the broken heart! ! ! ! ! ! really a nice poem but ending the poem without a hope is sad! ! ! ! ! but it shows the intensity of love! but departed love never ends it always remain in our mind bcoz of its pain! ! ! ! !
my heart nearly died when i lost one, but my inner strength was stronger than my grief and i cope admirally. you will be strong if you believe in yourself and survive a tsunami of grief for lost love.
Depression expressed in the feeling of wanting to die. Do not despair, for I can see beauty in your words and someone with beauty will always end up with someone kind and true to love.
I wish I could quench the lines so fiery! Hot! honest lines...
thumbs up this is a great poem.its really emotional.your word you used can be pictured to get the really understanding of your work piece.congratulations.