Heart Of Death Comments

thumbs up this is a great poem.its really emotional.your word you used can be pictured to get the really understanding of your work piece.congratulations.

your words touch my soul...beautiful write..love your style, very refreshing..blessings

wowo that was amazing i just loved it it was breath taking ur an amazing wrtiter keep going breath taking i dont even have words for it its so good

food for body, thought for mind and prayer for soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! if your heart died soul remains! ! ! ! give something to soul it will cure the broken heart! ! ! ! ! ! really a nice poem but ending the poem without a hope is sad! ! ! ! ! but it shows the intensity of love! but departed love never ends it always remain in our mind bcoz of its pain! ! ! ! !

my heart nearly died when i lost one, but my inner strength was stronger than my grief and i cope admirally. you will be strong if you believe in yourself and survive a tsunami of grief for lost love.

Depression expressed in the feeling of wanting to die. Do not despair, for I can see beauty in your words and someone with beauty will always end up with someone kind and true to love.

Very lyrical, very well written.

I wish I could quench the lines so fiery! Hot! honest lines...