Tuesday, September 26, 2006

Heart Murmurs..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaves of joy fluttering in the wind of your love
Are dying day by day with silent sighs
Pearls of hope sprouted by the grace of your smile
Started dropping one by one into the pool of tears
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Rajeswari A V
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Otteri Selvakumar 29 September 2006

heart murmurs is Woory mormerrs but good murmer's...

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Catastrophe King 26 September 2006

If heart does only murmur pain, Then u should let joy rain. And then, with every dropp by drop, Let the heart grow like a golden crop! ..........Rajeswari you write so very honestly... one can feel it! Love to read your works.

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Subhash Sivan 26 September 2006

Dear Poetess... words begin to sketch a frame senses outflows from its frame letters try to speak for heart .....................This is what I have to tell about ur poem... Really like a beautiful garland

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