Thursday, January 15, 2009

Heart Mechanic Comments

Rating: ★5.0

You tinkered
with my heart

took it apart
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 15 January 2009

'I hope you mind but I synchronised it with mine! ' :) Heart's rhythm synchronisation! The idea and the construction of the poem are very creative. In the laboratory of love experiments all is possible. Keep experimenting with your hearts and bodies and keep the lab's diary :)

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alice sunderland 15 January 2009

usual great standard donall. great piece of imagination......

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
Dónall Dempsey
Dónall Dempsey
Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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