Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Heart, Love Tones Comments

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When a heart is broken
with no noise here on earth
but in the skies
That is love!
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Muhammad Ali
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Bharati Nayak 01 December 2019

When a heart is broken with no noise here on earth but in the skies That is love! When eyes are heavy with the salty tide tears... not flowing out wetting you inside That is love! - - So beautiful expression.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2018

Dear Ali, you have astutely defined the love from different corners with interesting expression. One of them i like most is........... There is frankness as much as lie but there is space hard to melt the ice on lips but all it is written on your face That is love! Beautiful poem. Thanks for shsring.

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Mj Lemon 20 July 2017

Contrasts! That's the key to all profound reconciliations. And it is indeed so- -that the most profound breaks occur in utter silence. This is a magnificent poem, Ali.

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Bharati Nayak 12 April 2017

A captivating poem- - -I come to read it again and again.It goes to y Poem List.

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Akhtar Jawad 16 February 2017

Life and love nicely defined, a lovely poem.........................................

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Susan Williams 28 January 2017

Had to come back and read this again- -there is something hypnotic about this piece- - addictive too!

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Susan Williams 25 January 2017

hard to melt the ice on lips- - - - - - - - now that is an impactful image that will stick in my mind for a long long time- - - came back to read this one again

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Bharati Nayak 19 January 2017

'That is love- - -Such a wonderful piece of writing ! ! Wow- -Thanks for sharing.Goes to my Poem List.

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Chinedu Dike 17 January 2017

A good depiction of the gloomy face of love, elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Very insightful. Thanks for sharing Ali.

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Susan Williams 12 January 2017

You caught up the reader in your spell with this one! Very very good! You delved deep into the complexities and the simplicities of love in the midst of life

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Unwritten Soul 16 November 2016

Love is the shape of diamond-ed life, multifacetted to have different spectrum of colorful emotions..and thats what made it expensive.. :) love the poem you did here

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2016

Beautiful description of love and life. We know love because we have life, we have life we know there is death too! Loved the ink.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 July 2016

Great piece. So beautifully put...the power and magic of love. Wonderful expression. Beautiful use of words. Loved it.

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Valsa George 28 October 2015

Love can melt the ice, bring a smile to our lips and make this sad life happy! But there is also pain in love! Great write Ali!

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Neela Nath Das 26 October 2015

There is frankness as much as lie but there is space hard to melt the ice on lips but all it is written on your face That is love! - - - - - - Love knows to win heart......Loved.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 15 November 2014

When eyes are heavy with the salty tide tears... not flowing out wetting you inside That is love! An excellent love poem covering all idiosyncracies of love and life.Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2014

a beautiful poem about what love means. so well written and touching, enjoyed

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Akhtar Jawad 15 June 2014

Your love is divine love and your life is not this life but an unending life that comes after death. It's a nice poem.

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Yasmin Khan 30 December 2013

A deep and philosophical poem that ends in a paradox.

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Shahzia Batool 27 December 2013

when Joyce' protagonist discovers something new after using the inborn logic, he utters like you have uttered... That is love, that is life... Epiphany in simple terms! ! ! ! ! !

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