When a heart is broken
with no noise here on earth
but in the skies
That is love!
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Dear Ali, you have astutely defined the love from different corners with interesting expression. One of them i like most is........... There is frankness as much as lie but there is space hard to melt the ice on lips but all it is written on your face That is love! Beautiful poem. Thanks for shsring.
Contrasts! That's the key to all profound reconciliations. And it is indeed so- -that the most profound breaks occur in utter silence. This is a magnificent poem, Ali.
A captivating poem- - -I come to read it again and again.It goes to y Poem List.
Life and love nicely defined, a lovely poem.........................................
Had to come back and read this again- -there is something hypnotic about this piece- - addictive too!
hard to melt the ice on lips- - - - - - - - now that is an impactful image that will stick in my mind for a long long time- - - came back to read this one again
'That is love- - -Such a wonderful piece of writing ! ! Wow- -Thanks for sharing.Goes to my Poem List.
A good depiction of the gloomy face of love, elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Very insightful. Thanks for sharing Ali.
You caught up the reader in your spell with this one! Very very good! You delved deep into the complexities and the simplicities of love in the midst of life
Love is the shape of diamond-ed life, multifacetted to have different spectrum of colorful emotions..and thats what made it expensive.. :) love the poem you did here
Beautiful description of love and life. We know love because we have life, we have life we know there is death too! Loved the ink.
Great piece. So beautifully put...the power and magic of love. Wonderful expression. Beautiful use of words. Loved it.
Love can melt the ice, bring a smile to our lips and make this sad life happy! But there is also pain in love! Great write Ali!
There is frankness as much as lie but there is space hard to melt the ice on lips but all it is written on your face That is love! - - - - - - Love knows to win heart......Loved.
When eyes are heavy with the salty tide tears... not flowing out wetting you inside That is love! An excellent love poem covering all idiosyncracies of love and life.Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
a beautiful poem about what love means. so well written and touching, enjoyed
Your love is divine love and your life is not this life but an unending life that comes after death. It's a nice poem.
when Joyce' protagonist discovers something new after using the inborn logic, he utters like you have uttered... That is love, that is life... Epiphany in simple terms! ! ! ! ! !
When a heart is broken with no noise here on earth but in the skies That is love! When eyes are heavy with the salty tide tears... not flowing out wetting you inside That is love! - - So beautiful expression.