When a heart is broken
with no noise here on earth
but in the skies
That is love!
When eyes are heavy
with the salty tide
tears... not flowing out
wetting you inside
That is love!
While listening harsh with an ease
some words so soft make you freeze
That is love!
There is frankness as much as lie
but there is space
hard to melt the ice on lips
but all it is written on your face
That is love!
While leaving you...
Life... no more kind
A smile twinkles in your mind
That is love!
While going there...
when it is due
where death is sad
waiting for you
That is life!
when Joyce' protagonist discovers something new after using the inborn logic, he utters like you have uttered... That is love, that is life... Epiphany in simple terms! ! ! ! ! !
Life had never been kind to lovers. Love's many definitions nicely explained. Thank you.
When a heart is broken with no noise here on earth but in the skies That is love! .. yes when it is broken u look towards sky and curse and thhink and write so many things.... but beautiful write here...10 read mine butterflies around and mary to marry along with o, mother
That's love, that's life, the later comprising the former, a beautiful poem, you have both rythm and power of thought, a good combination. Press ahead but in a cautious way, giving yourself time to ponder deeply before reflecting. I liked your poetry, keep it up, without falling a victim of praise. Best wishes and regards Ejaz
When a heart is broken with no noise here on earth but in the skies That is love! When eyes are heavy with the salty tide tears... not flowing out wetting you inside That is love! - - So beautiful expression.
Dear Ali, you have astutely defined the love from different corners with interesting expression. One of them i like most is........... There is frankness as much as lie but there is space hard to melt the ice on lips but all it is written on your face That is love! Beautiful poem. Thanks for shsring.
Contrasts! That's the key to all profound reconciliations. And it is indeed so- -that the most profound breaks occur in utter silence. This is a magnificent poem, Ali.
A captivating poem- - -I come to read it again and again.It goes to y Poem List.
Life and love nicely defined, a lovely poem.........................................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A deep and philosophical poem that ends in a paradox.