Thursday, February 11, 2016

Heart Left At Your Headstone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shining down upon an empty life, threads now broken,
lying lifeless on the dirt-hard ground looking up,
satisfied no more with living.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Amitava Sur 15 February 2016

A very emotional and poignant write seeing the life to be ending with loads of unfulfillments, what possibly being true for everybody in some way or other. And that itself is the misery of a human life with which we have to live and leave also. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 14 February 2016

Head bowed, heart left there with you forever, never to be picked up and put back within my being again for you are not here to bring it back alive, my dear. A very very touching write which has sprung up from the core of your being! A life without the presence of someone who has been the be all and end all of life is now lying impoverished! Nothing can replace the vacuum created! This sense of helplessness is poignantly brought forth! I feel the pain and it will not leave me until some time! Top marks!

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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