Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Heart Knocks Comments

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Startled, by this trembling pound.
Standing, my feet planted on the ground.

But my world slipping six feet below my soles -
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Jennifer Strubel
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Philip Housiaux 05 February 2008

Very good work. the strong beat and rhyme in the couplets really give bang to your poweful statements! thanks

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