Thursday, December 3, 2015

Heart Is Not An Onion Comments

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Peeling away the layers of an onion,
that have been for years a companion,
avoid, in it are the frozen tears!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2015

Wow. So amazing definitely. Peeling out onion is humorous here. Yes heart is heart definitely. This beats spontaneously and conveys new born's message wonderfully. A marvelous work shared.10

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

Past was a lovely and pleasing smile, present is teasing and too fragile, future doubtful, has so many fears! Quite true! These lines give the sum of human life. After the beautiful years of childhood and youth, we enter the mid years of crisis and tension and wait for the uncertainty of old age.!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 03 December 2015

Excellent. I love to read it. Best wishes.

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