Sunday, May 31, 2009
Heart Is Beating With No Tune Comments
Rating: ★5.0
This heart I hear,
Is beating to no tune,
This heart is beating to nothing.
This heart is beating to no story
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) .
04 June 2009
This is most effective. I found the repetition of 'beat' gives the poem a beat of its own. A melancholy piece of good writing. 10 Karin Anderson
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7/19/2025 4:02:03 AM # 1.0.0
I really like this...it seems with just a few words to capture the whole feeling of no feeling...............................