Heart In A Coma Comments

awesome, from the title to the end welldone keep up the good work

This has a good beginning which captures the attention of the reader with vivid images and you carry out the theme throughout the poem. You tell it how it is or, at least, can be for all of us from time to time.

This one too, is an excellent write and I thank you, for bringing it, to my attention tonight!

lost in the places lost the desired quest tried for the best but found all the rest... smart rhying and more then enough to understand the feelings deep down the soul awesome writing, keep it up and thanks for sharing, ,

very nice liked it keep penning cheers