A lover sees his beloved
Hands in hands
Merry like a singing bird
Gives nothing but pain
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Welcome Poet to the Broken Hearts Club! ! Muito Lindo and touching! ! ! ! !
Simple but brilliant love expression... Some times very serene feel and some times it never was, never is, never will be POSSIBLE Pain pure pain Pals…. In a heart apparently complete its really a realistic love poem....
great and sweet love complaint........... sometimes such love are sweeter than fulfilled one......... love is love when long for........... and you have depict it with great skill....... these lines are very poignant, Beloved opens her heart And Says, Look! It needs you Incomplete it is, Only you can complete Both have love in hearts Both know it always be But It never was, never is
As genuine as the words from the mouth of a love analyst! The other experiences are the impacts of colossal ignorance perhaps. You have done it the way things are tutored to the young. Keep writing.
whenever i read your poem it is like i am listing to a romantic song....they always keeps me stuck you are brilliant sir
Most love poems are cliche and really cheesey (which is why I TRY to avoid writing them) , but this one stands out and feels real. I like it a lot.: D
Both have love in hearts Both know it always be But It never was, never is, never will be POSSIBLE so true...sometimes we are compelled to do so...but love never ends...it has no limits