Heart Desires Comments

Yes, Heart represents the soul. It makes us percieve all things nearest and dearest to the soul. Nicely put. Precise and beautiful. 10+++

This is a great poem about heart desires.

Hi Rini, .....gives many tries Until it finds its dream higher.... Beautifully expressed how the heart tries achieving the dreams, how it leads the human beings towards greater goals. Lovely write..100

I loved the finish, Until it finds the dream higher! And so we must strive for that higher ideal. As eyes are stunned by art and beauty, your word art is stunning and beautiful!

Eyes seek what heart desires! A short but highly expressive poem! (10)

What heart seeks in beat are desired by eyes. An amazing and brilliant poem is well penned.10