My heart cries out for you. The empty echo
leaves such a feeling of blue. Nothing I can do.
Time weeps for you, as the notes play out their
tune. And the little chick a dee, cries out in such
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A marvelous write full of images and great poetic expression.
A deeply poignant and touching poem. Each and every line has been woven to echo the feeling of loneliness and emptiness.
WOW! Marvelous poem, dearest Becca! May I put 5 Stars Fullest again on Top
Indeed, like Kostas said A FIVE STARS POEM FOR SURE! I do hope my comments stay here and that you can read both responses. Thank you so much for sharing, dear friend
With its bittersweet message that remains. True Beauty of a poem! Marvelous words! I have enjoyed very much this scintillating poem, Becca! Happy to find you here.5 Stars for this gem and to my favourites.Heart cries, loveliest captured! God's Blessings.
A magnificent poem... great rhythm. I appreciated fabulous use of imagery.5 stars and to MyPoemList
Just fabulous........ thanks for sharing.....