Monday, June 24, 2013

Heart - -Cinquain Comments

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Heart
Beats incessantly
Throughout our life
To makes us live
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chandra thiagarajan
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Valerie Dohren 27 June 2013

Apart from being an essential physical organ, the heart also symbolises life and love. Nice write.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 June 2013

heart a pumping machine

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

a good cinquain. without the heart we would not be.

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Unwritten Soul 25 June 2013

Because whenever it beating, it reminding that life is given for another second, and another second for us to have love.. from Him and everyone around_SOul

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 June 2013

To make us live, it must beat. Beautifully put.

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Kavya . 25 June 2013

a very nice poem mam...beats incessantly thruout our life...a lovely write indeed

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

Heart, the seat of love keeps beating for us and for others! A lovely write!

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Dinesan Madathil 24 June 2013

A heart beats incessantly and our love spreads its fragrance all throughout.. A great castle is built on that ever cherished dream and let it Never be reduced to the shambles of seasons.... Great write Madam Chandra.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 June 2013

to make us live loving, thanks. good write.

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