Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Heart Broken Comments

Rating: 4.8

the look in your eyes tell me that you care,
but when i turn around your not always there,
what did i do wrong for you to run and hide?
did i make you want to cry?
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Raven Fulford
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james Xane 14 September 2009

This is one lovely peace... the sadness flows out of every word, and the strong end - that's really nice...

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