Saturday, October 25, 2008

Heart Broken Comments

Rating: 2.5

The insanity that I gain when you leave my side
The child in side has fallen to his knees and cried
Everything I see reminds me of the life I once had
As the blood runs a sigh with glade
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Harley Morriss
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love the ryhming in this poem

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emo child 28 October 2008

i really like this poem. u have some real good talent

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 October 2008

Nice rhyming and ' when all I had was you' is the conclusion of yer ever needed love.........so powerful.........made ya helpless!

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Harley Morriss

Harley Morriss

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