Heart Break (Revised) Comments

so sad..very touching... expressing fragility but with strength.. the way a woman should be... great thoughts...a significant theme... thanks for sharing... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

A broken heart's break...a common happening because as per the indian tradition only the wife goes to stay with her husband and his family...for a change let us try the other way and see if the husband is hurt and breaks the bond...well done on the theme Sandra

very touchy! penned beautifully! 10+

heart break, yes.to walk away is natural.but few can really be brave and deny to just carry on with the misery.a good write.thanks

Heartbreaks yes but to start again its tooooo much! ! ! ! lots oflove anjali -10

Very feministic! Authoritative! And ofcourse a correct stance.................

Wow Sandra, beautiful. The ending brought it all together and you said it passionately like it is. Thank you for sharing your talent. :)

He broke her heart He tore her apart He crushed her ego He shattered her dreams Coz he felt thre......... lovely compositionand desrves....10

hhmmm what a heart break composition...well done go girl! ! ! 10+++

That's the best thing she had done.I hate people who broke a person's heart

Love it! Just thats what I wanted to say but the prompt says I have to type in atleast 20 characters... atleast 20!

She walked away in resentment, thinking they would never be in agreement. Well done.

written very well sandra...it actually shatters both this packing and leaving...before doing anything hasty i think a long look should be given to the time they had spent together...my parents fought almost every hour..but they never ever gave me a feeling of a broken home..in fact i was the judge in between...i don't know what the magic was..bitterness in domestic fights never let's us create homes

thou together, yet so far. heart breaks r so painful...good write

you know the perfect words to say it all excellent

sad story...good what she did