Heart Bit Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Bipin sankaliya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

hmmm interesting write. alot of hurt n anger portrayed in your lethal verse.

Maybe your stupid girl bit and care! ! ! Passion and angry walk hands to hands! ! !

I feel a lot of hurt in this poem. Wow, You spoke from the core.

short, simple but so full of emotions.......a talent indeed thank you for sharing sir payal

you can write better more like me...everyone can here write better than me.

is it only 3 lines? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? /not making any sense 2me

nice sad lyric poem.keep writing

hmmm u hav an interesting mind

Interesting. Makes one curious of it. I like that!

strong emotions well done