Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Heart Beat Comments

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The heavens explode around us
As we fall into the arms of love
Diamonds sprinkle your hair
With the sparkle of starlight
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Fiona Davidson
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Stephen Magill 07 October 2009

Anam Cara, what a beautiful thought.

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Sue Sie 24 September 2009

Truely, superb write.....Somehow with a magical 'air' to it....all you need for a loving heart beat.....excellent! ! .....Sue x

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maggie murray 23 September 2009

beautiful Fi....loved this one...Maggie

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Carl Harris 23 September 2009

This is a very lovely, sensual, and beautifully expressed romantic poem, Fi, one that was a great pleasure to read. I felt as if I could actually feel your imagery in this wonderful write! Carl.

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Carol Gall 23 September 2009

reminds me of the song verse cant you hear my heatbeat lovely fi

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Tsira Goge 23 September 2009

Eyes drink long and deep of emotion Diving into crystal pools of honesty. .................................................... Good phrase, my dear Fi... 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Martyres 23 September 2009

Heart Beat is another one of your beautiful romantic poems replete with exquisite imagery.......10 of course

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