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buenisimo...........

whatt a poem....i like the illustration it's a new idea of writing the name of a poem enjoyed

i like the poem it is about giving love without waiting for anything in return

I like the heartbeat illustration. It demonstrates creativity. This is really a letter to a former lover. It contains what you might expect. There is one new element. The detailed description of a new love. This is usually not put in such detail in a letter of this kind, no doubt, with some satisfaction born of love and not revenge. In the best tradition of a glorious love. GW62

Sweet....for a teenager like you...I would say you must not rush things out...Just your take time...enjoy life! ! ! Life is such a beautiful place to live in...it is a gift and we must all value that... Sometimes we think that 'he' is the one but turns out not to be in the end...Be strong! ! ! Stay strong! ! !

An appropriate place I hope to ask that you all take the time to think of 2 of PoemHunter's very special - Alison Cassidy and her Jerry Hughes who is undergoing major heart surgery now.... aroha Deana

awwww. its so sweet and cute. i love it! ! !

What a great way to describe the pain which some people go through! Great job, I really enjoy this poem and your style of writing. I think it's interesting how you add in the beeping and what people around the person are saying, it gives a lot more feeling to the poem and a sense that your the one witnessing it all happening. I'll be excited to read you next one. If you have the time, please read over one or two of my own poems. I would love to hear your input.