Heart And Soul Of Humankind Comments

This poem was originally deactivated by P.H. I was sincerely unable to see the reason why, unless we are not allowed ‘to swing our butts' on Poem Hunter. I see nothing wrong with ‘swinging your butt' if you feel the rhythm, or perhaps it is the mention of horses in a race. So, I changed the word ‘Horses' to ‘Cars'. It still got deactivated. So, I put ‘horses' back in and made some other minor changes, then republished it. If it gets deactivated again, can someone tell me why. What is objectionable about this poem? Where have I sinned?
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