Sunday, October 30, 2016

Heart And Mind Comments

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Lyn Paul 12 September 2018

Beautiful words of true love that greet many at least once in life.

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2016

oh, lucky me. i already read and commented. yay! bri ;) now to place it into Section A of November's showcase. see if you can find it there shortly.

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2016

there certainly is some truth to this poem, which you undoubtedly spent hours or days composing, despite your new job! but some fires are not extinguished by water! [think: electrical and oil i think] look at the fire extinguisher's labeling! a mix of heart and mind is better to use to deal with desires, i think. especially if the result of 'following your heart' is a not-so-great marriage, an unwanted baby, or an obese body (due to overeating/drinking) . :) :) bri

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Unwritten Soul 30 October 2016

Wonderful thought in this beautiful poem, a fine work! and also prove my mind :)

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