Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Heart Comments

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My heart must be a
face-cloth: you keep twisting it
till the blood runs dry...
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Jacqui Broad
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Harindhar Reddy 12 November 2011

Gosh! I can see the pain in your blood veins. But don't twist it yourself. I think your poem is pleading not twist your heart any more... Anyhow like in Haiku meaning is hidden. the same is case with this. Your TENDERLING! i say! Be strong and believe yourself! .... Good night... May blue in heart flies away! Till then be bold!

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Crimson Love 19 October 2011

beautiful, short yet your words are filled with lengthy meaning. well done.

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Stefanie Fontker 18 October 2011

Do not allow yourself to be drained, because you are full of life.

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