Heart Comments

nice visual metaphors of color: ''Green is its only feel Pink is its life wish Yellow is its lives goal Blue is its best pal Pale is its real truth'' By thinking of my rainbow of happiness I give you...10++++

Nice - I like the 'dreams are its food'.

Different colours and paces of the heart well depicted..10+++

an excellent write of the heart. a double ten.

This one is complex for me great flow...very interesting

Happy colorful poem, love it.

too fine and nicely written..............

fantastic and meaningfull.love this poem surya

fantastic and meaningfull.love this poem surya

AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really like it. it' just kind of roles of the tongue