Sunday, September 24, 2023

...Heart... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit alone in the dark with such
gratitude in my heart...
I sit alone in the dark with such
sorrow in my heart...
...
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Rebecca Navarre
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 September 2023

I too feel so small and humbled dear friend Becca. Thank you for this marvellous poem. Top marks and to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 September 2023

Then, the heart fills with gratitute at the beauty of nature and wonder of God's creations.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 September 2023

Sitting alone in the dark, looking through the trees with varied emotions - fear, sorrow and joy!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 September 2023

Wow! Dear Poetess Rebecca, how wonderful to read a heart warming poem - Heart!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 September 2023

The photograph is very artistic and beautiful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 September 2023

I sit alone in the dark and look through the trees, at all of Gods Great beauty! ... And i feel so small, like i'm nothing at all... And I sit alone in the dark with such love in my heart...I LOVE all your last 4 lines. TOP Marks, my dear Becca! All smiles from me now, a very heart touching poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 September 2023

TOP Marks for your Profound poem, dazingly conveyed, my dearest Becca! , your friend Sylvia

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 September 2023

Very true Rebecca TFS Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2023

Great thoughts to ponder about. Liked the closure lines.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2023

A very inspiring poem that fuels us to believe and feel the glory of God. Your great faith in the Lord is infectious, my friend. Thank you for sharing this powerful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2023

A very inspiring poem.

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 September 2023

Wonderful write! Top marks *****

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 September 2023

Beautifully expressed. So nicely crafted. We are just tiny particle of dust flitting here to there. Nice share.

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Sandra Feldman 24 September 2023

Beautiful and very significant contemplation. Thoughts deeply felt and run, Gorgeous poem that travels deep but also meets the sun. Meditation that congratulations and flowers, reaps.5+

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