Let it on this day Awake the warmth of spirit That binds two in one.......an emotional expression having lofty theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.
And the hearts beats together... beautiful work, words and thoughts :) im glad i reread again today
It so simple but it blending all emotions together...beautiful!
a prayer I think, or who can awake warmth of spirit or place love in hearts. lovely poem
The warmth of spirit that binds two in one. Yes. Nicely penned.
When love warms the heart, life takes an altogether new start, not only on Valentine's day, but every day! Just three short lines.... but steaming with passion! Love this minuscule of a poem!
Thank you, Valsa. And I'm in total agreement with what you say about the heart.
Awake the warmth of spirit- - - - - - - - - I keep returning to this phrase. Why? There is the awake and warmth- the use of the w sound and when said aloud we purse our lips like we are about to kiss. Hmmm. That would be a stealthy poetic tool to use- -do we do that automatically, without thinking about it, after all we have been talking all our lives. Awake the warmth- -is it that phrase that makes me return to this line? It could be, yet the awakening of the spirit draws my eyes, reminds me of the thirst we have for the things of the soul. The spirit that dwells in our soul- not the mean spirit, or the poor spirit, or the spiritless, but the warm spirit that makes us return to childhood and the touch of Mother's hand on our brow, return to the day we felt an intense love for mankind as it plummeted from the tower one September day, return to the young and tender beginnings of love between a man and his woman... you know what? I'm going to take a page out of your book and see if I can make a poem out of my comment here! ! Excellent write, my friend. You awakened my weary brain cells with your beautifully phrased Senyru! 10 ++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you so much, Susan! And indeed, yes, , , , that w w w w...that does make the lips reach out for the kiss. I tried a few options that almost worked, but that word....'warmth'...just perfect. And that is a fantastic idea! There is so much to work with in your comment....enough for maybe a few awesome found poems. Thank you again, and thanks for the 10! ! ! I'll get back to work on Who Am I? I don't expect a finished version just yet.
Poor heart, so taxed with love on lovers day In just 3 lines you told so much We are all heart, today! Very, very nicely done! Enjoyed.
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8/1/2025 3:18:07 PM # 1.0.0
nice depiction of Valentine in the west ts 8 Feb elsewhere every DAY
Thank you, Poet! I thought the 8th was Rose Day? I know there are the 14- or is it 7? - days to Valentine's....But to be in the rest of the world!