Sunday, October 4, 2015

Hearing Whose Footsteps Comments

Rating: 3.8

Again a day is lost in time’s dark cave
Tired sun is tilted and drowning in distant horizon
Slowly within the deeming and red twilight rays.
Dark night engulfs the green earth in it’s claw,
...
Read full text

Amitava Sur
COMMENTS
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 October 2015

End of another day as the cattle reach their den. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

1 0 Reply
Valsa George 07 October 2015

Yes, the day is closed with the return of cows from grazing, chiming their bells....... the dirge of the dead day! A very sweet write. The images used are arresting! A 10 Amitava!

2 0 Reply
Madathil Rajendran Nair 05 October 2015

The passing away of the day beautifully captured in a short poem with an amazing image. Thanks for sharing.

2 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

Well envisioned. Beautifully penned. Metaphorical write with attractive adjectives like.....Again a day is lost in time’s dark cave Tired sun is tilted and drowning in distant horizon Slowly within the deeming and red twilight rays. Dark night engulfs the green earth in it’s claw, Thanks for sharing such captivating poem., ......10

2 0 Reply
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 04 October 2015

Verily, a day gone, a step towards death, whether a year left, or a month or week. A lovely verse, conveying message, Loved reading it.

2 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 04 October 2015

Beautiful :) ........Another day is a shelter of tomorrow day and tomorrow will blanket the next day, and how the present being covered by past, what we still have is the same body of life just different skin of time, but memories are still be our growing mind

2 0 Reply
Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

Kolkata
Close
Error Success