Hear The Children Crying. Comments

this is what i've been saying with every poem i write. around the world millions of people wake up every day in extremly poor neiborhoods. no hope to get out, no way to get out, live in die in the same place. i mean i live in america one of the richest countrys on earth and i still live in the ghetto and always will because nobody cares about people who they see as less human then themselves which inj my opinion is why the world is so. well. doomed basicly, nobody cares about the people who work there fingers to the bone trying to feed there family and will probly keep on doing that for the rest of there lives.

Dear Poet Friend Dickson, You requested my comment by private message. I wish to collaborate with your heartfelt dedicated words here that will help others more fortunate listen, observe and do something about it. My own efforts for Love and Peace, especialy for childen and their familes is a song lyric that can be translated easily in any language. It's melody can inspire to be sung by all whom read, and listen with Love, Empathy and Compassion. The poem is listed first on my own List is; 'A New World Melody' Pass on the feelings every way you all can. Put all such poems and those of others in a string arounfd the world, copy written for 'Humanity'and all life on Earth louie levy

this is a really amazing poem that catches the feeling and emotion of children in our hurting world. nice choice of words. keep writing

that is so true keep writing your bound to have a carer in writing ur AMAZING! ! ! !

This is amasing i hope u keep writting

i'm speechless! asin!

it would be better if you will promote this poem

A poem of awareness and sensitivity. In Heaven the angels of these tragic children, always behold the face of God. Kind regards, Sandra

I use to have a smile and heart gets warm when hear a baby cry..It is his way of saying here I am, hi! . When a child gets a scratch, give it a care and kiss, the pain away to go! -I smile..I smile when I hear a child saying -mother! I'm hungry, lets go to eat, my choice is ice cream..I always smile while watching any child..I might manage a smile also when I hear this poem's children's cries but I cant watch them...my sight is blurred by my own tears..oh dear children, how unfair this world can be..

A great message to the world Hope people listen Rgds Noor

a really provoking write dickson.. you really aroused my feelings and my heart goes out for the victims... i guess the richer people around the world can best utilize there money for the relief of these people.. read mine.. A call to the world... regards prashant

omgosh! ! this made me sad while i read this....i feel the pain & sadness & i wish i could just end all of this awefulness.....its something i wanna do in life...make a difference of importance..help those who need it most..... GREAT WRITE! ! ! 23000+++