Monday, April 28, 2008

Heap Of Random Images Comments

Rating: 5.0

-There is no Why.-
wet walnuts, mellow daffodils
sozzled
a vat of cider simmering psalms
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~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

Outstanding write, your choice of words glow with radiance... A fine example! ! ! all the very best J.L

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rajagopal haran 28 April 2008

use of imagery is wonderful

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Original Unknown Girl 28 April 2008

Wow! almost came out like one full-on sentence! Delightful adjectives. So many images my mind went on overtime! HG: -) xx

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