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Great! Good. Understandable!

This one is great, but can be better executed! Think over again and I bet you can produce a even better version.

Alot of passion here. Strong write. -LP

Great poem! I really liked it.

Melody, thanks deeply for understanding. I did, even though it turned out very simple. I'm very glad that I could show how much wrong someone could feel.

I can connect with this poem and it has a strong meaning. You did a good job and it seems like you worked very hard on this.

June Bugg- Thanks, it was a little reaosn for the title. Tyrone- Aw! I'm really glad I picked this time too. And your welcome. I had this problem too, not with a drug but with a person. I think this was the hardest for me to write. Thanks. Frank- Thanks so so so much. I was hoping that'd happen!

Hi Life, This is a little beauty. You've captured the madness of love. I really enjoyed reading this one. Your first and last lines bookend the verse brilliantly. Frank

i enjoyed the final stanza...