Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Tuesday, December 13, 2022

Healthiest Town Ever Found Comments

Rating: 5.0

'I'm seeking somewhere to settle down, '
said the young man who was new in town.
'I am a man of substantial wealth,
and I want a place that's good for my health.'
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Kim Barney
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Hilarious! Loved the thinly veiled humour. Top and MyFavourites

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Unnikrishnan (may I just call you Unnik?) , thank you very much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2022

My question is: Could you send the same poem to another State for submitting in the contest? Truly remarkable, Kim but wonderfully done your pun. My two thumbs up!

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

It depends on the contest. Utah does not accept poems that have already won cash prizes, but Arizona does, if the poem has never been published. Utah does not publish their winning poems, so they can be entered in Arizona also.

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Part 2 of reply: Arizona publishes the poems that take first, second, and third place, so they can not be submitted again elsewhere with very few exceptions. There are a few contests that accept previously published poems.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2022

In Utah State in 2019 won this cute humorous poem the First Place and................in 2022 in the Arizona State Poetry Society annual contest the second Place. Amazingly won, dear Kim.5 Stars!

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Dear Sylvia, thank you for your multiple comments.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 16 December 2022

Kim, Lovely poem.

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Thanks, Hank. You won a higher percentage of games than I did at chess club tonight!

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Savita Tyagi 15 December 2022

Great message delivered with humor. This is what today's young restless folks need to keep in mind!

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Savita, thank you very much for the comment!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 14 December 2022

Now this is one of the funniest things I have read in a long, long time! Fantastic!

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Kim Barney 14 December 2022

Ron, I really appreciate the comment. Thanks a lot.

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2022

Are we sure Bri Edwards didn't write this one? Just askin'! bri edwards ;)

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Bharati Nayak 13 December 2022

Wow--marvelous.Thank you Kim Barney for this funny poem and congratulations for your prize.

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Kim Barney 14 December 2022

Dear Bharati, thank you for your generous comment.

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Belle Wassermeister 13 December 2022

This is hilarious stuff! I can see why it took first place in one contest and second in another!

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Kim Barney 14 December 2022

Dear Belle, thanks immensely. Your comment is truly appreciated.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 December 2022

Kim you put a smile and gave me a chuckle fro awful day with this poem Bravo!

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Kim Barney 14 December 2022

Dear LeeAnn, if this made you smile, it was worth writing!

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 December 2022

Love it Kim! Great poem x

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Kim Barney 14 December 2022

Thank you so much, Jayne!

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 December 2022

Love it! Well

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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