Saturday, September 2, 2017

Health Is Wealth Comments

Rating: 5.0

People milling in the hospital lobby
Each with their own concern
Some are waiting outside the laboratory
Others lining in the pharmacy
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Kevin Patrick 19 November 2022

The last two lines are a perfect closing. Fantastic

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Kevin Patrick 19 November 2022

A fine scintilliating work! . Highlights the problems of modern healthcare

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2022

An honest poem. Top score

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2018

Please treat irrespective instead of irrdespective.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2018

Sickness touches to all irredpective of young or old, rich or poor, caste, creed and colour and at that time they realize that prevention is better than a cure. When disease claim our lifves money gives no guarantee, hence we should take proper care of health. The saying is correct....health is wealth. Dear madam, you have fantastically inscribed this in your poem. A marvelous one.10

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