Saturday, February 18, 2006

Healing Comments

Rating: 4.3

My Heart beats rapidly
The anger pulses through me
you put your arms around me
and i am healed.
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Melissa Ferrer
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David Dennis 08 December 2006

Yeah, thats what it does. Hmmm... I could use a hug.

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Daniel Tyler 21 February 2006

I am pleased you kept this short Melissa because it works best in that tight form. The second stanza is very intriguing- is it romantic or paternal love? Very well done.

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Sylvia Chidi 18 February 2006

Interesting way of getting healed. Maybe it will become a universal cure.

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Duncan Wyllie 18 February 2006

What a wonderful realisation.Love Duncan

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Melissa Ferrer

Melissa Ferrer

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