Friday, May 9, 2014

Healing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon’s reflections
sparkle grains of sand
While I leave my foot prints
soon to be washed again
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Binayakumar Mohanty 21 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem. It is time to unwind just my time to heal. Nice line. I loved the poem. The poem deserves a huge 10+++Thanks for sharing. Binaya

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Colleen Courtney 09 May 2014

Love this poem. But if I may, I think in the line, where lay the quite seashells, do you mean where lay the quiet seashells? Just want to make sure it's as perfect as can be! Am adding this piece to my favorites list for it's beautiful imagery!

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