Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Healing Comments

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You were my first.
My sweet nothings,
and first kiss.
I cannot help but
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Danielle Martens
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Jim Butler 06 May 2009

As the others said, simple yet complex. It was great! ! :)

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Brittanie Thornton 29 April 2009

Great wording and, simple style I really liek this one. Great job!

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Tyler Smith 27 April 2009

Simple, yet poignant. 'There/is no band-aid/big enough for this/pain.' is prolly my favorite line in here, but, of course this is tyler speaking. You achieve the feeling of despair and sorrow, at least that's what I think. Remember the writing tip for all ages and you cannot fail. -Bond. James Bond.

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