Tuesday, March 19, 2019

Heal My Scars Comments

Rating: 4.5

Heal my scars I don't need them anymore,
It's my faith in the Lord that I need to restore,
Heal my scars so that I can no longer see them,
I don't need to keep being reminded of all my sins.
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Kim Weser
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Susan Williams 20 March 2019

Very good structure for this write- -the repetition was well done- - the plea is very heart-felt. I give it a 10

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Kim Barney 19 March 2019

All of us have scars. If we could only heal them with a word, poets would never keep scars, would we? Thanks for posting this, Kim!

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Castellenas John 19 March 2019

To heal our scars. Need great kindness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I could feel the need in your words.

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