Friday, April 27, 2018

Headaches Comments

Rating: 4.8

When thoughts are tightly packed
leaving no space to
accommodate another molecule
The mind tends to explode
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Rini Shibu
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Akhtar Jawad 06 May 2018

Don't think so much that no room is left for the further thinking. Thoughts travel from conscious to the sub-conscious and from sub-conscious to the unconscious. Be sure your thoughts are immortal and will be reflected in your dreams. Human mind is a wonder, let it remain absorbent of of new thoughts and human heart is a painter who can change the new thoughts in colorful flowers.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2018

Thinkers and writers! ! Busy minds! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2018

Espicially evil thoughts explode more headaches. A beautiful poem shared astutely. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 April 2018

Hi Rini, This poem takes its origin in the personal experience of heart ache. Inflicts pain in the heart of the reader as well. A 10.

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Robert Murray Smith 27 April 2018

Rini, this is a poem that explains our pain.+++10

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